Wednesday, July 20, 2011
The 24 Hour Writing Experiment
Tuesday, July 12, 2011
How I Decipher 8 Studio Lingo Terms
Tuesday, July 5, 2011
How Long Does A Brand New Spec Take?
Thursday, June 30, 2011
Write with a Scalpel
Saturday, June 25, 2011
The Train Takes Off!
My latest spec, The Great Train Adventure, co-written with my good friend and master DJ Graham Funke, just dropped on the Hollywood Spec Market this June and has had quite an amazing trip. The script is based on a real life story about the most exciting train chase in American history. It’s the story of a charming mercenary who leads a mission to hijack a Union locomotive. But when he finds two kids stowed away on board, they must unite to turn the tide of the Civil War, all while the kids’ heroic father, the conductor of the train, pursues them.
Within 24 hours of its release, several Producers leapt aboard the project to take it into Studios. As itsonthegrid.com reported, the hot spec’s next stop was Studioville, where it quickly began picking up passionate passengers. With my next spec only a couple months away from completion, I’m heading off to the town to meet my fans and pitch some more ideas. It’s been a very exciting and fast-paced run, and I can’t wait to see what’s next.
But where has Crack My Story been in the last six months? While splitting my time between writing and my side career as a SAT Test Prep Tutor, I learned that deeply analytical blogs take a lot of time. A colleague said to me “Your blog is great, so detailed and analytical, but how on Earth are you going to keep it up?” Well, I won’t lie. It was hard. But I’ve come to realize while I’ve had so much going on, that I should use Crack My Story more to share my odyssey into Hollywood. I forgot that my own pitfalls, experiences and journey offer even more fodder than my mere insights.
So Crack My Story is back with a new focus. Beyond the occasional analysis of a Hollywood trend or a recent movie, I’m looking forward to sharing the my discoveries as I proceed into the exciting second half of 2011. I see it as lessons from a “Baby Writer’s” next Hollywood Couch Tour. I’ll discuss experiences that I and my other colleagues tackle. Tips and techniques I find to overcome Writer’s Block and story problems. New websites and blogs worth checking out. The latest tools for Screenwriters.
Saturday, January 15, 2011
Your Perfect 2011 Golden Globe Scorecard
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
How to ID Award-Deserving Storytelling?
Some of us might know why we think Black Swan or The Social Network is good story-telling. Often times we can feel it. But in Hollywood, story-tellers are busy looking at the architecture of the story. We’re analyzing the moving parts, using words like character arcs, climax, theme, and rising tension.
And knowing a little more about these terms and their causal relationship with each other, can not only help you decide what you think about the recent Award nominees, but you’ll sound pretty smart on the upcoming Award nights evaluating the array of candidates.
1) Theme
Wait, does every movie need a theme? Well, no, but every good movie should have something to say. Some point-of-view. And that’s the theme. The message. The moral. We’ve been graced before with poignant movies like The Godfather, where the theme is: Using power and might to protect a family only destroys the family. Even our pulpy flicks like Star Wars or Harry Potter thematically state how good can only triumph over evil with courage and teamwork. So when you think about a movie like Black Swan, True Grit, The Social Network, The King’s Speech, The Fighter, or 127 Hours, what are these movies saying? What's their message?
2) Climax
You know that big final moment at the end of the third act that brings all of the questions of the movie to a close. That's the climax and the way the character finally handles the story conflict dictates the theme. In the Godfather, Michael’s final choice to close the door on his wife shows how he has closed the door on his own family, killing the family man he once was, and becoming the Godfather. How do the choices that the protagonists face at the climax of the award pics affect their theme? What is Social Network saying when “Mark Zuckerberg” allows his best friend to be cut out of the company? What is Black Swan saying when Nina takes the stage for her final performance?
3) Character Arc
Not every movie has a character arc, Zack. Well, did you know that the lack of change is also an arc? Like when a character maintains his willpower in the face of adversity. He didn’t change, but he was tested, and he emerged without changing or caving. Or a character that reveals their true nature. That’s an arc too. A character arc is simply the relationship between who the protagonist is at the start of the movie and who they are at the end. And their final test that determines the nature of their arc: you guessed it, the climax! And the lesson they learn or that is demonstrated by their actions: right again, it’s the theme! How does Nina Sayers, Rooster Cogburn, Mark Zuckerberg, King George VI, Mickey and Dickie, or Aron Ralston change by the end of their stories? What does that say about the theme?
4) Rising Tension
What, that the movie gets more exciting as we get towards the end? Yes. But there is another side to this. A well-executed rising tension doesn’t just keep you wanting to know what will happen next. It presents you with two specific options. The good ending and the bad ending. And you suddenly find yourself hoping for the good ending and fearing for the bad one. And it’s that ping-pong game of expectations that causes you to wring your hands during a good movie. Ambiguity is not a movie’s friend, because it prevents the audience from imagining the horror of a bad conclusion and the joy of a good one. And guess what? This hope and fear directly ties in to the two possible ways a hero can handle the climax, which determines their arc and decides the theme. So connected! So what are our specific hopes and fears for the five previous mentioned award pic characters?
When you stop to think about how the craft of that story was put together, you might suddenly realize while you may love MOVIE A because of some specific element, MOVIE B is actually put together with a lot more finesse. You can certainly appreciate it. And again, you’ll sound great on Award’s nights.
I'll be evaluating these films more closely, but I'd love to know what you think about the Awards' candidates and which movies you think deserve notice and discussion. Leave me comments or write me an email.
Wednesday, January 5, 2011
Writing Tip #1: How To Generate Story Ideas
Writers should always be writing. But what do you when it's time to start a new project and you are out of ideas. You have nothing! All of your old ideas are crap. And you need gold in a bottle now.
Sunday, January 2, 2011
Battle of the Directors: Aronofsky vs Boyle
So who’s the champion between these two? Both have shown they aren’t afraid to get psychologically down and dirty, both tackling some raw subject matter. This year alone, both magnificent Oscar nominated films, The Black Swan and 127 Hours, have award-winning performances and riveting stories. But Danny Boyle is one of seven directors to win a Golden Globe, Director’s guild, BAFTA and Oscar for the same movie, Slumdog Millionaire. Aronofsky is short in the awards department, but is about to go commercial with a RoboCop remake and X-Men Origins: Wolverine 2, both releasing in 2012. While that move might put him over the edge in box office revenue, currently that category also goes to Danny Boyle. Aranofsky is young, inventive and a true cinematic technician, but most of his films have explored purely the shocking and terrifying elements of human nature. He has yet to bring inspiration and uplifting heart to the screen. Danny Boyle, conversely has more range in his films, from the raw dark characters in Trainspotting, the Horror of 28 Days Later, and the uplifting feel good love story of Slumdog.